axes d'optimisation

English translation: areas for improvement

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French term or phrase:axes d\'optimisation
English translation:areas for improvement
Entered by: Louisa Tchaicha

14:31 Jul 4, 2012
French to English translations [PRO]
Marketing - Marketing / Market Research / international relocation
French term or phrase: axes d'optimisation
Hi again,

am I missing something here? what do you think?

"Coûts cachés, options inutiles, devis non pertinents constituent de véritables axes d’optimisation"??

this comes under heating "réduire les coûts sans perte de qualité ni de service

I think that there's a missing word here, I'm thinking "..constituent de vrais freins au axes..

Thank you in advance
Louisa Tchaicha
Tunisia
Local time: 19:21
areas of improvement
Explanation:
I actually think it is right, given that all these fields can be improved and as such they are areas of improvement...
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4 +4areas of improvement
Word Pass
4improvement axis/opprtunities
HERBET Abel
3opportunities to maximize the Benefit Cost Ratio
Wolf Draeger
Summary of reference entries provided
Petit Robert: axe
Kate Collyer

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areas of improvement


Explanation:
I actually think it is right, given that all these fields can be improved and as such they are areas of improvement...

Word Pass
France
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agree  Kate Collyer
6 mins
  -> cheers Kate!

agree  cc in nyc: areas for potential improvement
14 mins
  -> cheers CC!

agree  Philippa Smith: Yes. Or you could say "areas that need improvement/improving"
25 mins
  -> cheers Philippa!

agree  Emma Paulay
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  -> thanks Emma!
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opportunities to maximize the Benefit Cost Ratio


Explanation:
A bit wordy, I admit, but with the advantage of being business-speak executives and CFO's will understand and appreciate. Either way, I prefer "opportunities" to a literal translation of *axes* for its positive undertones.


    Reference: http://www.investopedia.com/terms/b/bcr.asp#axzz1zY4GPPH9
    Reference: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Benefit-cost_ratio
Wolf Draeger
South Africa
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improvement axis/opprtunities


Explanation:
I translate "axes"

HERBET Abel
Local time: 20:21
Works in field
Native speaker of: French
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Reference comments


14 mins
Reference: Petit Robert: axe

Reference information:
sens 5: direction générale

Example sentence(s):
  • Cheminons sans écart dans l'axe de notre sujet
Kate Collyer
United Kingdom
Native speaker of: English
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