Glossary entry (derived from question below)
French term or phrase:
vitrines aux gourmandises
English translation:
from window displays to gourmet treats
French term
vitrines aux gourmandises
Nov 27, 2012 17:09: philgoddard changed "Field" from "Tech/Engineering" to "Other" , "Field (specific)" from "Materials (Plastics, Ceramics, etc.)" to "General / Conversation / Greetings / Letters"
Dec 18, 2012 08:57: John Holland Created KOG entry
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Proposed translations
from windows displays to gourmet treats
So, for me, the portion to translate is in fact "des vitrines aux gourmandises":
"From Milan to Saint Petersburg, from London to Paris, from New York to Moscow, from window displays to gourmet treats, the XX showrooms...."
The idea is that the cube is the hot shape of the season in all of those different locations and contexts.
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In response to the note, I think the idea is that the cube shape, both as an overall global theme and in particular objects (such as items of furniture or cube-shaped chocolates, I guess, etc.), is part of a worldwide trend, and XX company is positioning itself on the forefront of this trend.
Something like that...
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BTW, my answer should read "window displays" and not "windows displays." Sorry for the typo.
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See #13 on the following list of trends for 2011, at http://www.trendhunter.com/tv/trends-in-2011-forecast :
"13. Modern Cubism - Cubed lighting, architecture, seating and technology are the perfect match for those valuing clean lines and an uncluttered aesthetic. The simplistic geometric shape of the cube lends itself well to modern minimalist homes as the quest for visual clarity saturates interior design and bleeds into product design, branding and many other industries."
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For a foodie example, see the recipe for "balsamic cubes" in the following article on "Quirky and fun food trends": http://www.lfpress.com/life/eat/2010/01/19/12531396.html
I had the same idea John. Only that here, talking about furniture, what have gourmet treats or food in general got to do with anything? What a nightmare of a text! |
Thanks, that makes sense. Thanks for the comment Katsy too as I was a bit worried about losing the grammatical structure of the comparison. |
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katsy
: you posted just as I was 'composing'! I'm glad I'm therefore not the only one to read the text as you do! i.e the FROM ...TO
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Thanks, katsy!
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writeaway
: where you see 'aux'. this would be nice if that's what it said. it's not like vitrines aux gourmandises is the end of the sentence
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Thanks, writeaway! I'm not sure how else to read or understand the sentence, though...
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Jocelyne Cuenin
: J'ai répondu à l'appel au secours de Katsy au sujet de A to B avant de voir votre contribution. Autrement, c'est vrai qu'on est dans les meubles ...alors treats tout seul? little treats? But not too sure about window display.
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Merci beaucoup, Petitavoine ! Je pense qu'ils veulent dire que les show-rooms XX s'associent à la tendance "cube" qu'on trouve partout, même dans les vitrines et les gourmandises. Mais ce n'est qu'une interprétation parmi d'autres...
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Catherine De Crignis
: Already replied to Katsy. I'd say we're barking up the wrong tree here. I'm not adamant, but quite sure. If this meaning was meant to be conveyed by the French, then the French would be disastrous.
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Thanks, CatherineDC! It is an ambigugous construction, and I agree with your discussion entry about checking with the client.
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Victoria Britten
: I think the French is possibly a bit heavy-handed, but I think it would be even more so to use the same grammatical construction a fourth time immediately after the first three, but with a different meaning.
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Thanks, Victoria! The grammatical repetition does seem a crucial element to me, as well.
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Daryo
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Thanks. Daryo!
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goody displays/displays of goodies
mouth-watering window displays
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GILLES MEUNIER
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thanks Gilou!
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Kate Collyer
: Mouthwatering is not the reaction I'd anticipate from looking at furniture!
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Josephine Cassar
: because "mouth-watering" refers only to delicacies, but in txet, it refers o all goods on display
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writeaway
: tempting which works with more than just food. mouthwatering doesn't work with furniture unless one is a termite
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I must be a termite then!
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SafeTex
: To answer Cassar' remark, you could also say that not all the food is 'eye-catching'. It might look plain but your mouth waters cos you know what it tastes like. For me, 'mouthwatering is the principal idea
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delicacies displays
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Kate Collyer
: That suggests food, whereas this is furniture. / Yes, "gourmandises" is food, but it's being used metophorically here, in a way not covered by "delicacies" in English.
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"gourmandises" IS food
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writeaway
: also delicacy displays in any case. like picture displays, not pictures displays.
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thanks for the correction, but it doesn't matter much now; the question was based on incorrect parsing.
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eye-catching window displays
Alternatively: opulent, luxurious, lavish, sumptuous.
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Second thought:
Stylish, eye-catching displays
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Davina Hepworth
: 'show-rooms' implies furniture or fixtures/fittings so this is the best suggestion.
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Thanks Davina!
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Josephine Cassar
: Best answer
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Thanks :)
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Catherine De Crignis
: Sounds good to me. Btw you're right in repeating it's not food ! I do find the French quite bizarre (in this question but also the others). A lot of blah-blah I wouldn't swear I get 100%.
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Thanks Catherine!
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Victoria Britten
: I think the phrase is picking up from the previous three occurrences of "de ... à ...", which this answer doesn't.
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I think the opposite, as explained in my comment to katsy's answer.
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speciality-food window displays
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Kate Collyer
: At the peril of repeating myself for the umpteenth time, this is NOT food-related! / There were several answers posted a good while previous to yours - reading them and their comments should have given you a clue!
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Keep your hair on, lady!
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temples of desire
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"The previous class had nicknamed MBK [a shopping mall] as the temple of desire."
http://jenny4peace.wordpress.com/2012/04/27/temple-of-desire...
"The store is a temple of desire, mixing the best of high fashion with cherry-picked CDs and beauty products"
http://www.burdastyle.com/blog/friday-playlist--2
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Trudy Peters
: You sure you're not thinking of certain sections of A'dam? :-)
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Daryo
: It’s really catchy, but too much "poetic licence" included.
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It NEEDS poetic licence. It's a punchy piece of (presumably marketing) copy in French, and it needs to be rendered similarly in English. I feel many of the answers here are too literal and pedestrian.
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from the showcases themselves to the delights they contain
It seems to me that the sentence doesn't make sense other wise :
"From Milan to St P, from London to Paris etc., from the showcases themselves to the delights they contain, XXX showrooms go about things the right way (respect form - if we want to keep that play on words!)
I would be very happy to have the opinion of a native French speaker on my understanding of the sentence!
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Well, interesting to see the contrasting views my parsing has received!
I stand by my interpretation. First, because the sentence does not make sense otherwise imo, because:
1.that would make two subjects very clumsily juxtaposed: 'des vitirines aux gourmandises', plus "les showrooms XXX"
2. I do not agree that "des vitrines aux gourmandises" MUST mean "containing" (and will go and find some example phrases of this type of structure in a minute). However, I am grateful to all for having given their opinions!
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Surtout,
cette campagne est très présente dans les magasins
de l’enseigne, des vitrines aux rayons.
http://www.lexpressiontopcom.fr/images/k2coms/resources/pdf/...
Dans son ascension sur la scène mode, le bijou s’est fait accessoire
de prédilection. Des vitrines aux magazines, des poignets
aux podiums, il est partout.
http://head.hesge.ch/IMG/pdf/Profil_-_Des_Bijoux_Partout_dec...
Je vous explique : des vitrines aux étages, des trottoirs aux décorations intérieures, des centaines que dis-je, deux centaines de lapins géants ont pris possession du Printemps.
http://www.sortiraparis.com/loisirs/shopping-mode/articles/1...
Couldn't resist that last one!
If you google "des vitrines aux" you will of course ALSO find "des vtrines aux mille saveurs", des vitrines aux couleurs d'automne" etc.
Now I will let others, the Asker in particular, decide what is the best translation.
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I did not mean to sound so arrogant! Apologies.
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writeaway
: nice idea if that's what it said
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thanks writeaway :-) - That's how I read it - can't make sense of it otherwise... awaiting opinion of a native FR speaker, that would be nice!
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Daryo
: you're right, that's the correct parsing! I usually start by checking the question itself, didn't do it this time.
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thanks Daryo :-)
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philgoddard
: It's not the correct parsing. "Aux" means "containing", as in "coq au vin", not "to". And "vitrine" doesn't literally mean a glass case - it's a furniture store.
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thanks Phil :-) I have added a note above
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Kate Collyer
: I did consider this, but my gut instinct says that the phrasing would be "DE vitrines aux gourmandises", not DES
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well we must agree to disagree on the de/des. thanks for your input Kate :-)
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Jocelyne Cuenin
: vous avez peut-être raison : on peut penser que le cube=thème global superlatif =A = vitrines du showroom ET le cube = versions particulières uniques = B (par ex. le meuble marqueterie Bauhaus). L'apposition viendrait p-ê après le sujet 'les showrooms xx'
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Merci Petitavoine :-) En effet, je vois les deux expressions comme en apposition.
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Catherine De Crignis
: Good to have considered it, but I think this interpretation is unlikely to be correct. I think Phil is right. I would describe the French as rather obscure, though...
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Thanks Catherine for your input :-)
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Victoria Britten
: This, for me, has to be the right construction: I like your poetic answer but find that it goes away from the style of the French.
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Thanks for your comment, Victoria :-)
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Wolf Draeger
: Think you have the right idea. Maybe find a way to simplify it a bit (the FR is rather OTT, imo).
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Thanks Wolf :-)
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our stunning showrooms and dazzling designs
Judging from Asker's related question (http://www.proz.com/kudoz/french_to_english/idioms_maxims_sa... I would say that both the showrooms and the products carry a "cube" theme (hence the awkward construction), and the French is deliberately comparing the products to sweet food, which is unfortunately lost in my translation.
From Milan to St Petersburg, London to Paris and New York to Moscow, X's stunning showrooms and dazzling designs are crafted in style...
From Milan to St Petersburg, London to Paris and New York to Moscow, our stunning showrooms and gorgeous designs are crafted in style...
Discussion
It might have worked? Window display confections? ;-)
De Milan à Saint-Petersbourg, de Londres à Paris, de New-York à Moscou, les show-rooms XX, des vitrines aux gourmandises, y mettent la forme du cube en...
i.e. "From Milan to St Petersburg, from London to Paris, from New York to Moscow, the stylish, eye-catching displays of the XX showrooms bring the shape of the cube to the city, both as..."