English to Greek Other Education / Pedagogy

It is apparent from its name and the fact that it is affiliated to the University of XXX, that the Department of ZZZZZ is a public organisation that specialises in the education sector. Learning opportunities need to be extended to all members of the community and increasingly, the establishment of learning communities is seen as the way to involve more people in the learning process. The traditional learning environment of instruction in a class setting is not attractive to many people. Rather, many people prefer self-paced learning that is not focussed on ***individual achievement*** and that takes place in an environment in which they are comfortable.

Έτσι το απέδωσα:
Πολλοί άνθρωποι μάλλον προτιμούν την αυτοδιδασκαλία που δεν στρέφεται στα ατομικά επιτεύγματα και που πραγματοποιείται σε ένα περιβάλλον στο οποίο είναι άνετοι.
Τι πιστεύετε;;; Είναι ΟΚ;;;