Aug 4, 2007 00:11
16 yrs ago
Chinese term
China
Available for DTP & Tech Translation
Native in: Chinese (Variants: Simplified, Mandarin) 
Works in: English to Chinese
铸就
Non-PRO
Chinese to English
Art/Literary
Art, Arts & Crafts, Painting
我们的努力铸就您的成功
我翻译作Our endeavor creates your success.
感觉有点不妥
我翻译作Our endeavor creates your success.
感觉有点不妥
Proposed translations
(English)
| 3 | mould your success |
pkchan
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| 3 | We endeavor to help you succeed |
Jason Ma
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Proposed translations
1 hr
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mould your success
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1 hr
We endeavor to help you succeed
I like the word *endeavor* you used here.
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Note added at 1 hr (2007-08-04 01:19:12 GMT)
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Alternatively we may try:
We help you succeed with our endeavors.
As in most advertisement text, here, *铸就* is used in a fancy way. It reminds me of another fancy word:*大气，不够大气...*。
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Note added at 1 hr (2007-08-04 01:19:12 GMT)
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Alternatively we may try:
We help you succeed with our endeavors.
As in most advertisement text, here, *铸就* is used in a fancy way. It reminds me of another fancy word:*大气，不够大气...*。
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