Nov 16, 2004 08:51
19 yrs ago
Dutch term
Netherlands
2 MA degrees and 32 years of experience
Native in: Dutch 
Works in: English to Dutch, Dutch
verslag van het schriftelijk overleg over de voortgangsrapportage
Dutch to English
Other
Government / Politics
Voor 'voortgangsrapportage' denk ik aan 'progress report', maar wat doe ik dan met het 'verslag'? Twee keer 'report' lijkt mij lelijk en verwarrend. Iemand een suggestie?
Verder ben ik er niet helemaal zeker van hoe ik 'schriftelijk overleg' het beste kan vertalen.
Verder ben ik er niet helemaal zeker van hoe ik 'schriftelijk overleg' het beste kan vertalen.
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Proposed translations
24 mins
Chris Hopley
Netherlands
Netherlands
Native in English
Netherlands
Dutch & German to English
Native in: English (Variants: US, Australian, Canadian, New Zealand, British, UK, Irish)
Works in: German to English, Dutch to English, Flemish to English, and 1 more.
Related KudoZ points
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48
Dutch term (edited):
schriftelijk overleg
Selected
written contributions, consultation
It sounds to me as though there has been an exchange of written memos and other comments ('schriftelijk overleg') - perhaps following a request for comment or as part of some consultation procedure - and that the 'verslag' sets out the outcomes of or the conclusions reached through these exchanges.
The best I could make of it would be along the lines of 'summary of the written contributions received concerning the progress report'. Alternatively, you could consider 'report of the consultation procedure concerning the progress report' if it suits the context better...
-> "This is a call for written contributions to assist the preparation
of a report on the future directions of automated deduction, as
explained below."
http://www-unix.mcs.anl.gov/qed/mail-archive/volume-3/0091.h...
-> "The European summary of the written contributions received shortly before the symposium carries a strong message for the Commission and the European Union in general."
http://europa.eu.int/comm/archives/leader2/rural-en/biblio/c...
The best I could make of it would be along the lines of 'summary of the written contributions received concerning the progress report'. Alternatively, you could consider 'report of the consultation procedure concerning the progress report' if it suits the context better...
-> "This is a call for written contributions to assist the preparation
of a report on the future directions of automated deduction, as
explained below."
http://www-unix.mcs.anl.gov/qed/mail-archive/volume-3/0091.h...
-> "The European summary of the written contributions received shortly before the symposium carries a strong message for the Commission and the European Union in general."
http://europa.eu.int/comm/archives/leader2/rural-en/biblio/c...
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Bedankt, Chris en de anderen. "
5 mins
Minutes
comes to mind. But was on earth is "schriftelijk overleg"?
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Note added at 6 mins (2004-11-16 08:57:40 GMT)
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Sorry, that should read: But WHAT on earth ...
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Note added at 6 mins (2004-11-16 08:57:40 GMT)
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Sorry, that should read: But WHAT on earth ...
+1
28 mins
Marijke Singer
Spain
Spain
Native in English
Spain
Technical translator with Math degree
Native in: English 
, Spanish
Works in: Dutch to English, Spanish to English, English to Spanish, and 3 more.
Related KudoZ points
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12
written consultation report regarding/about progress reporting
written consultation report regarding progress reporting
See websites:
http://www.scotland.gov.uk/cru/kd01/red/tpam-05.asp
"4.65 The written consultation report, the Glasgow evidence and the short term working group recommendations all pointed to the need for staff to be supported through the provision of training across a range of disciplines, with staff of all types receiving improved and increased training in relation to their potential involvement in tackling alcohol misuse. Gaps in training were identified for both generic and specialist staff, with the suggestion that staff who may have contact with service users and a role in provision may currently be ill-equipped to deal with alcohol issues."
http://www.projectsmart.co.uk/progress_reporting.html
"Progress Reporting
Progress reporting is a key element of project management. Reports should be issued by the Project Manager and circulated to the stakeholders on a regular basis. The following people must be included on the circulation list:"
See websites:
http://www.scotland.gov.uk/cru/kd01/red/tpam-05.asp
"4.65 The written consultation report, the Glasgow evidence and the short term working group recommendations all pointed to the need for staff to be supported through the provision of training across a range of disciplines, with staff of all types receiving improved and increased training in relation to their potential involvement in tackling alcohol misuse. Gaps in training were identified for both generic and specialist staff, with the suggestion that staff who may have contact with service users and a role in provision may currently be ill-equipped to deal with alcohol issues."
http://www.projectsmart.co.uk/progress_reporting.html
"Progress Reporting
Progress reporting is a key element of project management. Reports should be issued by the Project Manager and circulated to the stakeholders on a regular basis. The following people must be included on the circulation list:"
Peer comment(s):
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Tina Vonhof (X)
: I would use 'summary of written consultation' but you are are right about progress reportING.
10 hrs
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Thanks, Tina!
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15 hrs
documentation of the written deliberations regarding the progress report.
Je zou ook kunnen zeggen
"A paper on the deliberations regarding......"
"A paper on the deliberations regarding......"
+1
42 mins
Hermeneutica
Switzerland
Switzerland
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Switzerland
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Native in: Spanish , English
Works in: Dutch to English, German to English, French to English, and 16 more.
summary of written contributions regarding the progress report
We all understand what they are *trying* to say, so my "Highest" rating refers to the fact that this is how I would render it [not knowing further context; up to you to see if this fits with what follows in your text!]
Good luck! I loooooooooooove bureaucratese in ANY language! :)
Dee
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Note added at 23 hrs 23 mins (2004-11-17 08:14:49 GMT)
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Please see Chris\' note below, so if you decide to go for this phrasing, which avoids repetitions of \"report\" and the like, the points should go to him!
Good luck! I loooooooooooove bureaucratese in ANY language! :)
Dee
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Note added at 23 hrs 23 mins (2004-11-17 08:14:49 GMT)
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Please see Chris\' note below, so if you decide to go for this phrasing, which avoids repetitions of \"report\" and the like, the points should go to him!
Peer comment(s):
| agree |
Arsen Nazarian
2 hrs
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| neutral |
Chris Hopley
: Agree, but how is this essentially different to my suggested translation ('summary of the written contributions received concerning the progress report')?
12 hrs
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I'm sorry Chris, essentially, you're right, it isn't ... I hadn' t read your entire posting with enough attention, only your official suggestion, and this seemed a better phrasing to me. I'll see if I can mark it "not for grading"
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