Mar 27, 2022 07:10
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Hi,
I have been translating Ibram X Kendi's "How To Become An Antiracist".
Could you possibly explain the last sentence with different words?
I cannot properly explain what the author is highlighting by "Not just the number of people of all races who would not die each year from cancer"

"We can survive metastatic racism. Forgive me. I cannot separate the two, and no longer try. What if humanity connected the two? Not just the number of people of all races who would not die each year from cancer if we launched a war against cancer instead of against bodies of color who kill us in far lesser numbers."

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Yvonne Gallagher Mar 27, 2022:
@ Matthew Yes, I've been reading some background on the author and see you have come to much the same conclusion. Just saw your latest note after posting
Matthew McDonald Mar 27, 2022:
It might help to include more context It seems like, with the phrase, "I cannot separate the two," the author is referring to two concepts that he is relating in this fragment. I am assuming he is comparing cancer and racism.

I am also assuming that the author needed to add an active verb in the last sentence.

I think the author's point is that the amount of violence against "bodies of color" is massive.

Thus, he is making the comparison between cancer (and the amount of harm caused by that) and racism (which the author is arguing has a great deal of harm associated with it).

That is my attempt at deciphering this.
Oliver Simões Mar 27, 2022:
Lost in translation "I'm at a loss how to explain the unexplainable." Is the author still alive? If so, I would suggest contacting him/her directly and asking what they meant.
Yvonne Gallagher Mar 27, 2022:
@ Asker "bodies of color" is the part that is difficult here. What do YOU think it means since you have all the context? You have suggested "colored bodies that kill fewer of us" but that makes zero sense.
"not just the number" = not only the number, as others have said, but we need to know what "bodies of color" refers to in order to make sense of it in context.
José Patrício Mar 27, 2022:
philgoddard
awkward sentence:
In fact I think ‘who kill us in far lesser numbers.’ Refers to the cancer that, being the same number as the colored people, kill us in far lesser number.
I think there is hear a somewhat surreal metonym.
José Patrício Mar 27, 2022:
"My interpretation: ‘Not just the number’ means hear not just the real number but the psychological number, a great number between us ‘white’ is, the same, a psychological tiny number in bodies of color, because their importance for us is very little, yet.
Then, ‘not just the amount’, but the identity
philgoddard Mar 27, 2022:
I can see why you posted this I can't make head or tail of this awkward sentence with its double negative. Bodies of color who kill us?
Andrew Paul Kennett Mar 27, 2022:
Possibly Could it be that the writer sees cancer and racism as two insidious diseases that grow slowly over time?
That he uses cancer to highlight how racism slowly forms?
As Tony M explains: "just a number" = "only a number" = dehumanized".
Racism dehumanises people and is considered a cancer or an ill to be fought, as cancer in any form is fought by doctors.
People are not just numbers but human beings in their own right.
People die because of racism as they do from cancer, so one would need to fight against the root cause.
By eliminating this, it would save peoples lives which would then benefit the world as a whole.
Tony M Mar 27, 2022:
@ Asker Not quite: they don't mean it in the sense of "just a number" = "only a number" = dehumanized, but rather, "the fact that fewer people (of any colour) would die each years is not the only benefit of 'connecting the two'." Presumably at some point the author goes on tho talk about the other benefits; clearly saving so many lives would be a HUGE benefit, but according to the writer, not the only one.
MuratK. (asker) Mar 27, 2022:
A Note Below is my interpretation of the sentence but I feel that it doesn't give the full message.
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If we started a war against cancer, not against colored bodies that kill fewer of us, people of all races who survive cancer each year wouldn't be just numbers.

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not only the number of people...see below

OK so I found articles about the author and having read them finally think I understand what he is saying

https://www.nytimes.com/2019/08/06/arts/ibram-x-kendi-antira...

In the final chapter of “How to Be an Antiracist,” Dr. Kendi
connects his own cancer with the “metastatic racism” afflicting America. To cure it, he says, we must actively combat it, rather than taking comfort in the false neutrality of being “not racist.”

So, in other words, he is saying that racism is like cancer "metastatic racism" and should be attacked in exactly the same way as we attack cancer instead of jist saying we are "not racist"

What if humanity connected the two? = racism and cancer

Then if we launched a war against it (racism) it would not only be about the number of people of all races who would survive cancer but also those who would survive racism, even though "bodies of color" kill far fewer of us in any case.

He seems to be referring to people of all colors being racist in some form, including himself. So "bodies of color" may be referring to institutionalised racism and/ or anti-racism movements. Groups of people of one color or another. It says he felt as a black that he was a lesser mortal in school with white and Asian classmates and felt little was expected of him from his teachers so he didn't even try.

Note that he mentions how Trump attacked black lawmakers but he also notes how Obama also made some racist comments.

He (Dr. Kendi) "defines racist ideas expansively: any idea that there is something inherently better or worse about any racial group. There is no such thing as “not racist” ideas, policies or people, he argues, only racist and antiracist ones.


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Note added at 7 hrs (2022-03-27 14:18:05 GMT)
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https://www.penguin.co.uk/articles/2020/june/ibram-x-kendi-d...

"A racist policy is any measure that produces or sustains racial inequity between racial groups. An antiracist policy is any measure that produces or sustains racial equity between racial groups. By policy, I mean written and unwritten laws, rules, procedures, processes, regulations, and guidelines that govern people. There is no such thing as a nonracist or race-neutral policy. Every policy in every institution in every community in every nation is producing or sustaining either racial inequity or equity between racial groups.

Racist policies have been described by other terms: “institutional racism,” “structural racism,” and “systemic racism,” for instance [...]"Racist policy” says exactly what the problem is and where the problem is. “Institutional racism” and “structural racism” and “systemic racism” are redundant. Racism itself is institutional, structural, and systemic.

“Racist policy” also cuts to the core of racism better than “racial discrimination,” another common phrase. “Racial discrimination” is an immediate and visible manifestation of an underlying racial policy. When someone discriminates against a person in a racial group, they are carrying out a policy or taking advantage of the lack of a protective policy. We all have the power to discriminate. Only an exclusive few have the power to make policy. Focusing on “racial discrimination” takes our eyes off the central agents of racism: racist policy and racist policymakers, or what I call racist power.

"A racist is someone who is supporting a racist policy by their actions or inaction or expressing a racist idea. An antiracist is someone who is supporting an antiracist policy by their actions or expressing an antiracist idea. “Racist” and “antiracist” are like peelable name tags that are placed and replaced based on what someone is doing or not doing, supporting or expressing in each moment. These are not permanent tattoos. No one becomes a racist or antiracist. We can only strive to be one or the other...."

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Note added at 7 hrs (2022-03-27 14:27:37 GMT)
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BTW he seems to be using "bodies of color" to refer to groups of people of color. See here:
"Droughts and food scarcity are ravishing bodies in Eastern and Southern Africa, a region already containing 25 percent of the world’s malnourished population. Human-made environmental catastrophes disproportionately harming bodies of color are not unusual; for instance, nearly four thousand U.S. areas—mostly poor and non-White— have higher lead poisoning rates than Flint, Michigan.


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agree Tony M
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agree Anastasia Kalantzi
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