English to Spanish Bus/Financial Finance (general) Corporate credit card

Dear Cardholder
We wanted to personally welcome you to XX Commercial Cards. Your company has selected the XX commercial card, as it will deliver value to your organisation and business benefits to you.

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Estimado Tarjetahabiente
Queremos darle personalmente la bienvenida a las Tarjetas Comerciales de XX. Su empresa ha elegido la tarjeta comercial de XX, ya que le dará una ventaja competitiva a su organización y usted obtendrá beneficios comerciales.