Russian term
Ukraine
исходные данные от банка
"исходные данные от банка"
я перевожу
"raw data from the bank"
Я не уверенна можно ли так перевести
Я бы могла использовать initial data, (source data) from the bank,
но мне хочется, чтобы текст письма был как можно более формальным, и написан деловым языком, хотя я не уверенна в этом термине.
Заранее спасибо.
Оригинал:
Добрый день!
Большое спасибо за оказанное внимание и быстрый ответ.
Данные, указанные вами для перевода денег правильные,
но мы на всякий случай отправляем заполненную форму (*******)и исходные данные от банка (*******)
Просьба проверить правильность заполнения формы.
Просьба сообщить e-mail о переводе денег на счет
С уважением,
*******
Перевод:
Dear Sir or Madam
Thank you (very much) for your consideration and prompt reply!
The information you provided for the money transfer is correct,
but just in case we send you the completed form (*******) and raw data from the bank (*******)
Please check the correctness of the filled form.
Please send an e-mail letter after sending money to our company’s account
Sincerely,
*******
| 4 +2 | bank details |
Tevah_Trans
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| 3 +1 | banking data |
Nadezhda Golubeva
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| 5 -1 | original data from the bank |
Mónika Földi
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Proposed translations
MS Industrial Engineering; MBA
Native in: English 
, Russian
Works in: Russian to English, English to Russian
bank details
Russian Federation
Experience and Responsibility
Native in: Russian
Works in: English to Russian, Russian to English
banking data
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Sarah McDowell
: This is correct. No extra adjectives are needed to describe the data - not source, not original, not fresh, not raw - just data, pure and simple.
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Thank you!
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Hungary
Native in: Hungarian
Works in: English to Hungarian, Hungarian to English, Russian to Hungarian, and 1 more.
original data from the bank
| disagree |
Sarah McDowell
: Not original. It's just "data", not original or source. We are not talking about a source text, like in translation - it's just data.
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