Feb 1, 2003 10:55
21 yrs ago
Russian term
беспокоиться за зрение, рассматривая сайт оптической компании
Russian to English
Art/Literary
идея такая: "пока вы разглядываете наш сайт, вам не придётся беспокоиться за своё зрение. мы позаботимся о нём за вас, потому что всё, что касается оптики - наша профессия". просили шутливо обыграть, потому что site и sight - похожие слова.
я придумала что-типа "the only website that cares about your eyesight" (или that's good for your eyesight), но игра слов получается неочевидная. ещё, наверное, можно придумать что-то с optics & optical illusions, но креатив что-то не прёт. it's about optics, not optical illusions. как-то не в кассу. или про website-eyesight нормально?..
я придумала что-типа "the only website that cares about your eyesight" (или that's good for your eyesight), но игра слов получается неочевидная. ещё, наверное, можно придумать что-то с optics & optical illusions, но креатив что-то не прёт. it's about optics, not optical illusions. как-то не в кассу. или про website-eyesight нормально?..
Proposed translations
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| 3 +5 | You won't ruin your eyesite when you look at our web-sight! |
Libero_Lang_Lab
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| 4 +4 | Our site is your sight! |
William Stein
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| 2 | the site that is the best for your sight |
Kirill Semenov
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Change log
Apr 25, 2005 12:13: Kirill Semenov changed "Field (write-in)" from "���� ���������" to "(none)"
Proposed translations
+5
2 mins
Libero_Lang_Lab
United Kingdom
United Kingdom
Native in English
United Kingdom
The sports specialists
Native in: English
Works in: Russian to English, English, French to English
Related KudoZ points
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1214
Selected
You won't ruin your eyesite when you look at our web-sight!
There are lots of websites, but only one web-sight!
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If I was looking for a good URL for this company, I would be inclined to choose:
www.i-sight.com
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www.i-site.com
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I\'m off to buy them both now, so i can flog them to your client...
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The website with vision!
Our website has vision!
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The most visionary site on the web
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After this I start charging.
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If I was looking for a good URL for this company, I would be inclined to choose:
www.i-sight.com
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Note added at 2003-02-01 11:00:27 (GMT)
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www.i-site.com
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Note added at 2003-02-01 11:00:51 (GMT)
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I\'m off to buy them both now, so i can flog them to your client...
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Note added at 2003-02-01 11:02:57 (GMT)
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The website with vision!
Our website has vision!
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Note added at 2003-02-01 11:03:27 (GMT)
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The most visionary site on the web
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After this I start charging.
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Dan, you're beyond genius. %) Thanks!.. Inspiration is what I lack these days (...and nights). Heh. "
5 mins
Kirill Semenov
Ukraine
Ukraine
Native in Russian
Ukraine
60+ books translated and published
Native in: Russian 
Works in: English to Russian, Russian
Related KudoZ points
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3318
the site that is the best for your sight
Это просто как вариант, а главное -- мне кажется, еще лучше просто sight, тут сразу и "мнение", и "впечатление", и "оформление сайта". Не знаю, правда, будет ли так понятно, что речь про оптику. :)
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Еще в копилку:
The site best suited for your eye-sight.
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Но мне все-таки очень нравится первый вариант Дэна,
то есть идея переставить sight и site. Красиво!
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И насчет optical:
Optical: not an illusion, but reality.
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Еще в копилку:
The site best suited for your eye-sight.
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Note added at 2003-02-01 11:07:57 (GMT)
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Но мне все-таки очень нравится первый вариант Дэна,
то есть идея переставить sight и site. Красиво!
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И насчет optical:
Optical: not an illusion, but reality.
+4
11 mins
William Stein
Costa Rica
Costa Rica
Native in English
Costa Rica
Translations that read like originals
Native in: English (Variants: UK, US)
Works in: French to English, German to English, Spanish to English, and 3 more.
Related KudoZ points
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320
Our site is your sight!
Sorry, I couldn't resist!
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Libero_Lang_Lab
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| agree |
Kirill Semenov (X)
1 min
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| agree |
Yelena.
12 mins
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| agree |
Mark Vaintroub
4 hrs
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