Oct 17, 2007 14:57
16 yrs ago
English term

has been

English Marketing General / Conversation / Greetings / Letters
The sophistication and diversification of features in recent years has been particularly impressive.

Should this be "have been" or is it ok as "has been"?
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Discussion

Philip Soldini (asker) Oct 17, 2007:
Context Everyday modern information and communication devices such as mobile phones, TVs and car navigators are evolving at a tremendous pace. The sophistication and diversification of features in recent years has been particularly impressive. However, these very same advancements have made devices more and more complicated to use.

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1 min
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have been

as this includes both sophistication and diversification (2 subjects)
Peer comment(s):

agree Mark Nathan : they have been, although, in conversation, the singular is commonly used in the sort of example you give.
4 mins
thanks, Marc! Yes, that's true, although incorrect, and to be avoided in writing. Often seen when 2 linked ideas are lumped together - but I don't think these 2 ideas are close enough to come under 1 single category
agree Craig Meulen
7 mins
thanks, Craig!
agree kmkrowens
11 mins
thanks, kathleen!
agree Nesrin
18 mins
thanks, Nesrin!
neutral awilliams : I think it's fine as it is because it refers to "sophistication and diversification of features" as a unit
18 mins
thanks, Amy! That's the point I was making (to Marc), but while "growling and barking" are a unit, "sophistication" and "diversification" are 2 separate things.
agree Patricia Townshend (X)
28 mins
thanks, Patricia!
agree Terry Burgess
32 mins
thanks, Terry!
agree V_Nedkov
44 mins
thanks, V.Nedkova!
agree Jack Doughty
1 hr
thanks, Jack!
agree Sheila Wilson : incorrect today, probably becoming correct tomorrow as the rules relax - that's the way English is moving
1 hr
thanks, Sheila - yes, who knows! Although things become "generally accepted" long before they actually become "correct"!
agree Astrid Elke Witte
1 hr
thanks, Astrid!
agree Melzie
1 hr
thanks, Melzie!
agree Refugio
2 hrs
thanks, Ruth!
agree orientalhorizon
9 hrs
thanks, OH!
disagree David Moore (X) : I'm sorry Carol, but this sounds monstrous to my ENS ears; IMO, the two terms ARE to be treated as a single compound term.
21 hrs
to your WHAT ears??
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Sorry for the late grade! The two seemed to act as a single unit to me...but I seem to be in the minority! Thanks for everyone's feedback and help!"
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2 mins

It should be have been ...

because of the plural subject. However, in conversation in the USA, this would be overlooked and not lead to problems in understanding.
Peer comment(s):

agree Craig Meulen
7 mins
agree orientalhorizon
9 hrs
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14 mins

(comment not for points)

I'm not sure of the context, and the following comment depends on the preceding sentences, amongst other things, but if I was editing this text I would check this sentence very carefully.

Do "sophistication" and "diversification" really belong so closely together in this sentence or the argument of the author? "Sophisitication" is a noun referring to a simple property of the features, whereas "diversification" is a noun referring to a _process_. I can imagine the author might mean:

the sophistication and diversity of features ... (properties)
the increase in sophistication and diversity of .... (process/es)

But of course, I can't tell without seeing the surrounding sentences.

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Note added at 30 mins (2007-10-17 15:28:20 GMT)
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Thank you for the context. Now it is clear that there is a slight misunderstanding - before it says "evolving" and after there is "advancements", which is clearly plural, so I think the author wants to say "increase in sophistication". I suggest:

... pace. In particular, in recent years there has been an impressive increase in their sophistication and the diversification of features. However, these advancements ...



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Note added at 32 mins (2007-10-17 15:30:23 GMT)
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Or:

... pace. In particular, in recent years there have been impressive increases in sophistication and the diversity of features. However, these advancements ...
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