совокупность которых

English translation: см.

10:33 Aug 4, 2020
Russian to English translations [PRO]
Law/Patents - Law: Contract(s)
Russian term or phrase: совокупность которых
Общество с 1 января 2019 года не вносило никаких изменений в условия существующих на 1 января 2019 года трудовых договоров, совокупность которых увеличивала бы общие расходы такого Общества на персонал более чем на XXX рублей в год.

...

под "совокупностью которых" имеются в виду все изменения?

all of which, taken together, would increase...

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responder
Russian Federation
Local time: 21:51
English translation:см.
Explanation:
I have a nagging feeling that "aggregate" is a wrong register here.

Как обычно, предлагаю избавиться от громоздкого русского и конструкции типа such much - yes, such.

... did not introduce any changes to …. resulting in cumulative increase of personnel expenditures by more than …

Не нужно здесь еще раз повторять «Общество», чтобы облегчить предложение.
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IrinaN
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Local time: 13:51
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Спасибо, Ирина!
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3 +1which, in aggregate, (would...)
Frank Szmulowicz, Ph. D.
4см.
IrinaN


  

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which, in aggregate, (would...)


Explanation:
Proposition.

Frank Szmulowicz, Ph. D.
United States
Local time: 14:51
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Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in PolishPolish
PRO pts in category: 104

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agree  YESHWANT UMRALKAR: the aggregate of which (would )
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  -> Well put YESHWANT UMRALKAR. Thank you.
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см.


Explanation:
I have a nagging feeling that "aggregate" is a wrong register here.

Как обычно, предлагаю избавиться от громоздкого русского и конструкции типа such much - yes, such.

... did not introduce any changes to …. resulting in cumulative increase of personnel expenditures by more than …

Не нужно здесь еще раз повторять «Общество», чтобы облегчить предложение.

IrinaN
United States
Local time: 13:51
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in RussianRussian
PRO pts in category: 40
Grading comment
Спасибо, Ирина!
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