tulisannya yang padat, tajam dan to the point langsung kena sasaran

English translation: concise, sharp, and straight-to-the-point writing style

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Indonesian term or phrase:tulisan yang padat, tajam dan to the point langsung kena sasaran
English translation:concise, sharp, and straight-to-the-point writing style
Entered by: ErichEko ⟹⭐

01:55 Sep 18, 2006
Indonesian to English translations [PRO]
Social Sciences - Journalism / general
Indonesian term or phrase: tulisannya yang padat, tajam dan to the point langsung kena sasaran
Akibat tulisan-tulisannya yang padat, tajam dan to the point langsung kena sasaran, maka sejak 23 September 1927 hingga 22 Maret 1928 Bung Hatta ditangkap dan dipenjara di Denhaag.
mockingbird (X)
his concise, sharp, and straight-to-the-point writing style
Explanation:
"padat" must refer to conciseness (brief but comprehensive). "tulisan" here is not simply writing, but rather "gaya tulisan" or writing style.

Sample:
http://debiansystem.info/
I liked Krafft's precise, straight-to-the-point writing style. He makes basic as well as advanced topics readable ...

Then:
"As a result of his concise, sharp, and straight-to-the-point writing style, from Sep 23, 1927...
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ErichEko ⟹⭐
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Summary of answers provided
4 +2his concise, sharp, and straight-to-the-point writing style
ErichEko ⟹⭐
5because of his detailed, accurate, and outspoken writings, ...
Harry Hermawan
4his solid, critical and bold style of writing
Ecko
3condensed, sharp and directly pointing the object of his writing
Hikmat Gumilar


  

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3 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
condensed, sharp and directly pointing the object of his writing


Explanation:
imho

Hikmat Gumilar
Indonesia
Local time: 20:52
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Native speaker of: Native in IndonesianIndonesian, Native in SundaneseSundanese
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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +2
his concise, sharp, and straight-to-the-point writing style


Explanation:
"padat" must refer to conciseness (brief but comprehensive). "tulisan" here is not simply writing, but rather "gaya tulisan" or writing style.

Sample:
http://debiansystem.info/
I liked Krafft's precise, straight-to-the-point writing style. He makes basic as well as advanced topics readable ...

Then:
"As a result of his concise, sharp, and straight-to-the-point writing style, from Sep 23, 1927...

ErichEko ⟹⭐
Indonesia
Local time: 20:52
Native speaker of: Native in IndonesianIndonesian
PRO pts in category: 12
Grading comment
Thanks all

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  Hikmat Gumilar: saya rasa ada perbedaan dalam tulisan lugas tidak bertele-tele dalam menyampaikan pesan dengan tulisan yang menunjuk batang hidung seseorang yang membuat ia dipenjara
11 mins
  -> Tidak bertele2/lugas/padat membuat tulisan Bung Hatta mudah dimengerti. Jadi, di samping tajam + langsung-ke-sasaran, hal ini bikin masalah. Jika sekadar tajam + tembak-langsung, namun sukar dimengerti karena bertele2, Bung Hatta mungkin aman2 saja.

agree  John Gare (X): but what about 'langsung kena sasaran'? Suggest 'struck right home. As a consequence ..."
3 hrs
  -> Thank you John. "struck-right-home" is a good alternative, yet it is less popular. "as a conseq" is far better than "as a result", I have to admit.

agree  Ramona Ali
21 hrs
  -> Terimakasih Ramona...
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3 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5
because of his detailed, accurate, and outspoken writings, ...


Explanation:
Akibat tulisan-tulisannya yang padat, tajam dan to the point langsung kena sasaran, maka

Consequently, because of his detailed, distinct, and outspoken writings, he was..

outspoken: terbuka mengingat beliau orang Sumatra, dan mengingat masa ini adalah masa penjajahan

Harry Hermawan
Indonesia
Local time: 20:52
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Native speaker of: Native in IndonesianIndonesian
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3 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
his solid, critical and bold style of writing


Explanation:
imho

Ecko
Local time: 23:52
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in IndonesianIndonesian
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