porté à incandescence

English translation: raised to the pitch of incandescence

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French term or phrase:porté à incandescence
English translation:raised to the pitch of incandescence
Entered by: Faustine.Rou (X)

13:42 Jun 18, 2010
French to English translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Philosophy / Philosophie et Litterature, memoires
French term or phrase: porté à incandescence
Hi,

I'm having the most difficult time translating this sentence:

Sartre répondait exactement au vœu de mes quinze ans : il était le double en qui je retrouvais portées à l’incandescence, toutes mes manies.

It's an extract of Simone de Beauvoir's book so the translation should be as beautiful and literary as possible.
Although I understand the meaning of "portées à incandescence", I cannot find a nice translation for it.

Thanks in advance for your help.
Faustine.Rou (X)
Local time: 02:06
raised to the pitch of incandescence
Explanation:
Sartre corresponded exactly to the dream companion I had longed for since I was fifteen: he was the double in whom I found all my burning aspirations raised to the pitch of incandescence. I should always be able to share everything with him…
— Memoirs of a Dutiful Daughter, 1959
http://www.tameri.com/csw/exist/beauvoir.shtml

Not that I'm suggesting you plagiarize, of course.

The above may possibly have been "translated from the French by James Kirkup", assuming it's the same edition. It's certainly a popular rendition.

She said, "the double in whom I found all my burning aspiration raised to the pitch of incandescence." After meeting Sartre, she was no longer alone. ...
www.webster.edu/~woolflm/beauvoir.html

he was the double in whom I found all my burning aspirations raised to the pitch of incandescence. I should always be able to share everything with him… ...
historyofmodernphilosophy.blogspot.com/.../existentialist-couple-sartre-and.html

Simone De Beauvoir: aspiration raised to the pitch of incandescence." After meeting Satre, she was no longer alone. Simone's mid-life was optimistic. ...
www.allfreeessays.com/topics/alone-life/660

He was "the double in whom I found all my burning aspiration raised to the pitch of incandescence." Simone de Beauvoir taught at the Lycee and she became a ...
www.phenomenologyonline.com/scholars/scholars.html
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Bourth (X)
Local time: 03:06
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5 +1raised to the pitch of incandescence
Bourth (X)
3 -1he was the double in which i discovered the burning flame of my obsessions.
chris farmer
3 -1brought to incandescence
Andre Dumoulin
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liz askew

  

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8 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): -1
he was the double in which i discovered the burning flame of my obsessions.


Explanation:
ok its a bit loose and might even change the meaning, but it might start a discussion on the subject... seems to be more a question of using syntax to get the right sense.

chris farmer
Belgium
Local time: 03:06
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
disagree  B D Finch: It does change the meaning. De Beauvoir's obsessions were raised to a higher level by Sartre.
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36 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): -1
brought to incandescence


Explanation:
He was the double in which I could mirror all my own obsessions brought to incandescence.

Example sentence(s):
  • Figurative use The word \'incandescent\' is also used figuratively to describe a person who is wound up to a sustained white heat of anger about something.[4]

    Reference: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Incandescence
Andre Dumoulin
Panama
Local time: 20:06
Native speaker of: Native in SpanishSpanish, Native in FrenchFrench

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
disagree  Verginia Ophof: I see "Double" here as soul mate/twin, etc
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52 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5 peer agreement (net): +1
raised to the pitch of incandescence


Explanation:
Sartre corresponded exactly to the dream companion I had longed for since I was fifteen: he was the double in whom I found all my burning aspirations raised to the pitch of incandescence. I should always be able to share everything with him…
— Memoirs of a Dutiful Daughter, 1959
http://www.tameri.com/csw/exist/beauvoir.shtml

Not that I'm suggesting you plagiarize, of course.

The above may possibly have been "translated from the French by James Kirkup", assuming it's the same edition. It's certainly a popular rendition.

She said, "the double in whom I found all my burning aspiration raised to the pitch of incandescence." After meeting Sartre, she was no longer alone. ...
www.webster.edu/~woolflm/beauvoir.html

he was the double in whom I found all my burning aspirations raised to the pitch of incandescence. I should always be able to share everything with him… ...
historyofmodernphilosophy.blogspot.com/.../existentialist-couple-sartre-and.html

Simone De Beauvoir: aspiration raised to the pitch of incandescence." After meeting Satre, she was no longer alone. Simone's mid-life was optimistic. ...
www.allfreeessays.com/topics/alone-life/660

He was "the double in whom I found all my burning aspiration raised to the pitch of incandescence." Simone de Beauvoir taught at the Lycee and she became a ...
www.phenomenologyonline.com/scholars/scholars.html


Bourth (X)
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agree  B D Finch: Unless a fresh and rethought translation is called for.
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Sartre corresponded exactly to the dream companion I had longed for since I was fifteen: he was the double in whom I found all my burning aspirations raised to the pitch of incandescence….
— Simone de Beauvoir, Memoirs of a Dutiful Daughter, 1959

liz askew
United Kingdom
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