un rendu plus présent

English translation: a more noticeable effect

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French term or phrase:un rendu plus présent
English translation:a more noticeable effect
Entered by: claude-andrew

16:07 May 18, 2016
French to English translations [PRO]
Cosmetics, Beauty / Hair conditioner patent
French term or phrase: un rendu plus présent
L’émulsion est appliquée sur cheveux humides.
Elle peut être suivie d’un rinçage à l’eau tiède ou non, si l’on souhaite **un rendu plus présent** sur le cheveu.
L’émulsion va apporter nutrition et brillance aux cheveux tout en aidant au démêlage.
claude-andrew
France
Local time: 20:01
a more noticeable effect
Explanation:
This is an alternative to the suggestions already given. See below for an example in context.
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Victoria Piq (X)
France
Local time: 20:01
Grading comment
Thanks Victoria!
4 KudoZ points were awarded for this answer



Summary of answers provided
3 +2a more noticeable effect
Victoria Piq (X)
2 +1a more conspicuous/stronger outcome
Philippe Etienne
3deeper conditioning
Sheri P
3more body
Jennifer White


  

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15 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 2/5Answerer confidence 2/5 peer agreement (net): +1
a more conspicuous/stronger outcome


Explanation:
I understand that the hair will be shinier without rinsing

Philippe Etienne
Spain
Local time: 20:01
Native speaker of: Native in FrenchFrench

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Chakib Roula
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2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
deeper conditioning


Explanation:
The product can be left in the hair if deeper conditioning is desired. I think you need to move away from the French on this one. The properties listed in the final sentence (nutrition, brillance, démêlage) are all properties associated with hair conditioning.





Sheri P
United States
Local time: 15:01
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 20
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3 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +2
a more noticeable effect


Explanation:
This is an alternative to the suggestions already given. See below for an example in context.

Example sentence(s):
  • For very subtle ombré just spray a couple of inches up, for a more noticeable effect, spray lower half of the length of your hair.

    Reference: http://www.slice.ca/beauty/blog/how-to-diy-ombre-hair-with-n...
Victoria Piq (X)
France
Local time: 20:01
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 4
Grading comment
Thanks Victoria!
Notes to answerer
Asker: Yes, thanks for that suggestion Victoria, I feel it expresses what they mean


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Elizabeth Tamblin
12 mins

neutral  Jennifer White: your ref is for hair colour
1 hr

agree  Delina Alwanger
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4 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
more body


Explanation:
or maybe volume?

Jennifer White
United Kingdom
Local time: 19:01
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 8
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