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11:42 Aug 11, 2013 |
English language (monolingual) [PRO] Social Sciences - Social Science, Sociology, Ethics, etc. | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Yvonne Gallagher Ireland Local time: 22:35 | ||||||
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Benefit - (everything else) Explanation: The way I read it, it means that the things being benefited are "communication, research institutes, consumer organisations, and SMEs...". |
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the communication of advantages Explanation: It's just one of the list of fields, but the rest of the sentence isn't very well written. So they're experts in fields related to food risk, the communication of advantages to be gained from whatever the consortium is about AND from research institutes etc. |
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benefit communication Explanation: Hi Eva I think that the author probably intends the word 'benefit' to be linked to the noun 'food' rather than 'communication', so the sentence would be clearer if it was rearranged slightly to read, 'the communication of food risks and benefits' rather than 'food risk and benefit communication'. Does this help? Laura -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 11 mins (2013-08-11 11:53:48 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Lincoln may also be right in his interpretation! If that's the correct interpretation in the context of the document, just adding an 's' to 'benefit' would make the sentence clear. Example sentence(s):
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for improved information circulation Explanation: relevant to food risk and TO benefit communication; i.e, in order to improve the dissemination of information; |
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communcation of (risks and) benefits of food Explanation: see here http://resourcecentre.foodrisc.org/communicating-both-risk-a... -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 10 mins (2013-08-11 11:53:18 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- otherwise it would be BenefitS: it is really to be read as the X consortium is comprised of experts in key fields which are relevent to the communication of risks and benefits of food... communication, -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 11 mins (2013-08-11 11:54:12 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- typo relevAnt -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 24 mins (2013-08-11 12:06:45 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- and another typo in heading OMG!!! communIcation -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 45 mins (2013-08-11 12:27:31 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- adding in Jenni's tweak it would read the X consortium is comprised of experts in key fields (which are) relevant to communications related to food risks and benefits, research institutes, consumer organisations, and SMEs in nine EU Member States: Ireland, UK, the Netherlands, Belgium -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 7 days (2013-08-18 19:42:20 GMT) Post-grading -------------------------------------------------- glad to have helped |
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