07:52 Dec 27, 2007 |
English language (monolingual) [PRO] Tech/Engineering - Law: Patents, Trademarks, Copyright | |||||
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| Selected response from: Marie Scarano Italy Local time: 13:07 | ||||
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5 | see version below |
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3 | one suggestion as follows |
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one suggestion as follows Explanation: and at the inlet of the roentgen radiation, the space between the body wall and the plane capacitor is occupied by an insert of a dielectric material having a lower absorption capacity for roentgen radiation than the filling gas |
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see version below Explanation: dielectric material with a lower absorption capacity for roentgen radiation than the filling gas is located/inserted in the space between the roentgen radiation inlet and the plane capacitator wall. I tend to minimize everything. It seems to me that "insert" is superflous in this case, so use it as a verb in the active voice to emphasize clarity. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 8 hrs (2007-12-27 15:56:12 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- an insert of diaelectric material with a .......is located in the space between.... |
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