10:51 Oct 1, 2019 |
English language (monolingual) [PRO] International Org/Dev/Coop | |||||||
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| Selected response from: satrans Slovenia Local time: 19:57 | ||||||
Grading comment
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3 +4 | advocate in coalition with ... for ratification/implementation |
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4 -1 | Remove comma |
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Discussion entries: 3 | |
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Remove comma Explanation: It's hard to really say without more context but to me the sentence would sound right and flow better if you removed the comma after "the rights of domestic workers" and say "in order to" instead of "to". I also think that perhaps "in coalition with" is not the right phrase here but again it's hard to suggest something else without more contexts, perhaps "by working with" "Advocate for the ratification and implementation of ILO Convention 189 in order to advance the rights of domestic workers by working with domestic workers’ groups and leaders." |
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Notes to answerer
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25 mins confidence: peer agreement (net): +4
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