16:04 Jul 16, 2012 |
English language (monolingual) [PRO] Art/Literary - Esoteric practices | |||||||
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5 | simply it means you'll be able to think with undivided attention |
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4 | not as simple as consciously using one's mind |
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simply it means you'll be able to think with undivided attention Explanation: Yes, correct. According to the text, you build up a successful life through concentrated/ conscious thinking. |
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not as simple as consciously using one's mind Explanation: The author is using a unique phrase "conscious thought constructions" to give a name to the process described as: "build(ing) up a strong assurance that your every venture will be successful. ... you control your mental creations; they in turn help to mould your physical environment, and you become the master of circumstances and the ruler of your kingdom." This is not normal concentration but a spiritual/esoteric idea. Normal concentration (or using one's mind consciously) does not necessarily make ine the "ruler" of his or her kingdom. From the standpoint of translation I think you will have to come up with a similarly unique and odd sounding formulation. |
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