16:48 Jun 27, 2012 |
English language (monolingual) [PRO] Art/Literary - Esoteric practices | |||||||
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4 +3 | Yes, you can connect these sentences but maintain the same voice |
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Yes, you can connect these sentences but maintain the same voice Explanation: I'd suggest this linkage or something similar: "The one we concentrate on and develop determines what we will become and can even completely change our career paths and produce miracles." "Produce miracles" is a little strange, but it's understandable. |
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