need to be charged that is not used

English translation: if not used for some time, the battery may need to be recharged

08:21 May 11, 2009
English language (monolingual) [Non-PRO]
Tech/Engineering - Electronics / Elect Eng / about iPods
English term or phrase: need to be charged that is not used
Whole phrase:

"iPod Player has a internal no removable battery, the battery may need to be charged that is not used for a while"

Does this mean: "If the battery is not used for a while, it may need to be recharged"? Thanks.
solejnicz
Netherlands
Local time: 22:57
Selected answer:if not used for some time, the battery may need to be recharged
Explanation:
Yes, that would indeed seem to be the meaning; this English is really bad, so one has to be wary of it every step of the way.
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Tony M
France
Local time: 22:57
Grading comment
Thanks, I think your solution is the best because of the word "time".
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SUMMARY OF ALL EXPLANATIONS PROVIDED
4 +2if not used for some time, the battery may need to be recharged
Tony M
5it may need to be recharged
Yasutomo Kanazawa
4You seem to have understood it correctly
B D Finch


  

Answers


11 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5
it may need to be recharged


Explanation:
Yes, your interpretation is correct.
Rephrase:
iPod Player has an internal battery which is not removable (or which cannot be removed), and if the battery is not used for a while, it may need to be charged.


Yasutomo Kanazawa
Japan
Local time: 05:57
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in JapaneseJapanese
PRO pts in category: 12
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11 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
You seem to have understood it correctly


Explanation:
You seem to have understood it correctly, but the whole sentence (not just the bit you ask about) is really bad.

B D Finch
France
Local time: 22:57
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 4
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12 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +2
if not used for some time, the battery may need to be recharged


Explanation:
Yes, that would indeed seem to be the meaning; this English is really bad, so one has to be wary of it every step of the way.

Tony M
France
Local time: 22:57
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 304
Grading comment
Thanks, I think your solution is the best because of the word "time".

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Jack Doughty: Yes. and NON-removable battery.
3 mins
  -> Thanks, Jack! Yes, indeed, that too... if we try and correct all the EN in this doc, we'll never get finished eh?

agree  Phong Le
2 hrs
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