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20:32 May 12, 2015 |
English language (monolingual) [PRO] Tech/Engineering - Automation & Robotics | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Charles Davis Spain Local time: 23:18 | ||||||
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4 +8 | it makes sense |
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4 | pls see below |
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if the insulation material is wet it makes sense Explanation: Though there are some other problems with the English. The two statements are compatible. If the insulation material gets wet, it can be dried. While it is wet, it doesn't work properly. Once it has been dried, it works again. The wetting does not affect the insulating properties in the sense that it does not permanently remove or destroy them. Those properties are still present, though temporarily suppressed by the moisture. "Dried up" should be just "dried". "Anymore" should be "any more". -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 26 mins (2015-05-12 20:59:23 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- I would also say that "does not affect the properties" is a poor choice of expression. They must mean "does not permanently affect"; clearly it affects them temporarily. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 27 mins (2015-05-12 21:00:10 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- "Dried out" would be OK instead of "dried up". In fact that's quite probably what they intended to say. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 29 mins (2015-05-12 21:01:32 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Another point, while we're about it: the comma after "dried up" is not correct. Ithould be either a semicolon or a full stop. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 29 mins (2015-05-12 21:02:06 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Sorry; the last sentence above should read: "It should be either [...]." -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 42 mins (2015-05-12 21:15:28 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Perhaps you are also concerned about "the properties change" versus "does not affect the properties". Again, it is badly expressed, but we are meant to understand "the properties temporarily change (while it is wet, but change back once it is dry)" and "does not permanently affect the properties (only for as long as it is wet)". |
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