whereby 18:27 Mar 19, 2013
would in this specifc instance be quite wrong, as it is not in all cases a synonym for 'in which'; in point of fact, the synonym you could use here would in fact be simply 'where' — or the more formal 'wherein'.
As a sort of rule-of-thumb guide, the 'by' in both 'whereby' and 'thereby' conveys the sort of idea of 'by means of which' — "The trick whereby he was able to embezzle the money...".
Here, in your text, you can see that there is no causal element whatsoever, and hence the term would be out of place. |