14:17 Aug 12, 2014 |
English language (monolingual) [PRO] Marketing - Advertising / Public Relations / an Ad about Screen Protection for Smartphones and Other Devices | |||||
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| Selected response from: Yvonne Gallagher Ireland Local time: 16:56 | ||||
Grading comment
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SUMMARY OF ALL EXPLANATIONS PROVIDED | ||||
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4 +9 | (optimum) visual enjoyment |
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4 +3 | (provide) a feast for the eyes |
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2 +1 | maximize your visual experience |
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(provide) a feast for the eyes Explanation: Excellent screen transparency and color rendering provide a feast for the eyes (maximize your visual enjoyment) -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 7 mins (2014-08-12 14:24:35 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Yes, but a bit mundane, and lacking style,in my opinion; still, completely correct though; |
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