overflowing moisture

Indonesian translation: kelembapan (super) ekstra

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English term or phrase:overflowing moisture
Indonesian translation:kelembapan (super) ekstra
Entered by: Regi2006

06:32 Aug 7, 2016
English to Indonesian translations [PRO]
Cosmetics, Beauty / Lipstick
English term or phrase: overflowing moisture
Lipstick with overflowing moisture and glittering colours like diamond!
Regi2006
Indonesia
Local time: 05:45
kelembapan (super) ekstra
Explanation:
Karena kalimatnya kental dengan nuansa 'marketing'nya, maka terjemahan pun menyesuaikan.

Lipstick with overflowing moisture and glittering colours like diamond! = lipstik dengan kelembapan (super) ekstra dan warna-warni kemilau laksana intan permata!

Ada perbedaannya antara intan, berlian, batu permata. Usulan terjemahan di atas lebih menekankan 'rima'.
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fird_77
Indonesia
Local time: 05:45
Grading comment
Terima kasih. Sepertinya jawaban ini lebih kental nuansa marketingnya.
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Summary of answers provided
5 +1sangat lembab
Hipyan Nopri
5kaya akan kelembapan
Wiyanto Suroso
4kelembapan (super) ekstra
fird_77


  

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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5
kaya akan kelembapan


Explanation:
Terjemahan bebas "overflowing moisture" adalah kelembapan yang berlimpah. Kata "berlimpah" cenderung dibayangkan sebagai "meluap", yang kurang cocok untuk lipstik. Dalam hal lipstik, yang dimaksudkan adalah selalu tampak atau terasa lembap. Menurut saya, "overflowing moisture" dapat dipadankan dengan "kaya akan kelembapan" sebagaimana yang telah ada contohnya di bawah ini.

Lipstik kaya kelembaban, ....

http://id.ozcosmetics.com/Elizabeth-Arden-Pewarna-Bibir-Exce...

Wiyanto Suroso
Indonesia
Local time: 05:45
Native speaker of: Native in IndonesianIndonesian
PRO pts in category: 10

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  ErichEko ⟹⭐: Sebenarnya, kelembapan yang berlimpah akan seiring seirama dengan karakteristik berikutnya: warna-warni yang berkilau, menciptakan sebuah punchline yang mudah diingat sebagai kata-kata pemasaran.
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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5 peer agreement (net): +1
sangat lembab


Explanation:
Saya mengusulkan terjemahan kreatif seperti di atas sebagai padanan dari 'overflowing moisture' (kelembaban yang melimpah).

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Note added at 1 hr (2016-08-07 08:12:51 GMT)
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Ralat: lembab seharusnya lembap.

Hipyan Nopri
Indonesia
Local time: 05:45
Native speaker of: Native in IndonesianIndonesian
PRO pts in category: 8

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  M. Laut
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3 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
kelembapan (super) ekstra


Explanation:
Karena kalimatnya kental dengan nuansa 'marketing'nya, maka terjemahan pun menyesuaikan.

Lipstick with overflowing moisture and glittering colours like diamond! = lipstik dengan kelembapan (super) ekstra dan warna-warni kemilau laksana intan permata!

Ada perbedaannya antara intan, berlian, batu permata. Usulan terjemahan di atas lebih menekankan 'rima'.

fird_77
Indonesia
Local time: 05:45
Native speaker of: Native in IndonesianIndonesian, Native in JavaneseJavanese
PRO pts in category: 4
Grading comment
Terima kasih. Sepertinya jawaban ini lebih kental nuansa marketingnya.
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