Balvir Chand Aug 22, 2018:

@ Ashutosh Ji चर्चा (Discussion) की इस सुविधा से परिचित करवाने के लिए आपका धन्यवाद जिसका कि मुझे पूर्व ज्ञान नहीं था। भविष्य में चर्चा की इस सुविधा का प्रयोग करना सुनिश्चित करूूंगा। लेकिन एक तरह से मेरा Answers में सुझाव देना ठीक भी है, क्योंकि यदि इस उत्तर को सही चयनित कर लिया जाता है, तो भविष्य में ऐसे किसी वाक्य की दुविधा में पड़े अनुवादक को सीधा कुडोज़ पर सहायता मिल सकेगी। धन्यवाद सहित।

Ashutosh Mitra Aug 22, 2018:

@balvir जी.. मेरी प्रतिक्रिया पर आपके उत्तर के लिए धन्यवाद। लेकिन कुडोज़ में ऐसी स्थितियों के लिए ही, चर्चा (Discussion) की सुविधा दी गयी है।

Sanjeev Dhadwal (asker) Aug 21, 2018:

@Amarpaul: Submissions about the context The usage of the words ‘convoluted rendering’ positively brought a smile, even though it is post-midnight. Primary intent behind posting it on the forum was to solicit suggestion on a ‘tighter’ replication of the source words in Hindi version.
Prima facia, I agree with your comments on the ‘Translation evaluation’. The actual (factual and/or otherwise) replication of the words & context of the source in the translation, however, becomes evident when one re-translates it back to the source. In the translated version I personally, as a matter of viewpoint and preference, do not include any ‘superfluous words’ that do not exist in the original.
After all, the purpose of translation is to capture & replicate the source's context and the words, only, as they exist in the original. The sentence posed herein is, otherwise, a very simple sentence used in day-to-day communication. This gives the translator the leverage to more-or-less use whatever comprehendible word combinations, as the reader would understand.

Hope this clarifies the intent, :).

amarpaul Aug 21, 2018:

@Sanjeev: Just curious ... ... as to why you're seeking a convoluted rendering when you already know the "straight" translation and it would be understood by 100% of Hindi speakers living in modern times. While we can use a dictionary-thesaurus to create more complicated options (as already provided by some learned colleagues), my own test for a good translation is to ask: "Would I ever speak like this in general conversation?" Hence @ashutosh-ji's translation is the only one that makes sense in that it does not distort the meaning too badly. Otehrwise, the one listed in your original post is perfect. The other options are verbal contortions like Baba Ramdev's yogic aasananas :-)

Ashutosh Mitra Aug 21, 2018:

इस (this) जाल-स्थान (site) पर (an) एक (one) आदेश (Order) रखें (place) ... something like this..
You want a translation to communicate the msg, or what?

Sanjeev Dhadwal (asker) Aug 21, 2018:

Context" 'Site' means 'Website'. Seek help in an exact 'replica' of the words in 'English', not the standard ones as mentioned in the initial post.

Thanks!