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Mar 22, 2013 13:38
11 yrs ago
English term

see the setence below

English to Chinese Other Wine / Oenology / Viticulture wine
produce a wine that combines modernity and classicism, elegance and finesse which reveal the specifications of each vintage that expresses each harvest of the best fruit.

thanks in advance
Proposed translations (Chinese)
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4 参考如下

Discussion

Wen-zhe (Clyde) Ye Mar 23, 2013:
Modernity 和 classicism应是指新兴与传统的酿酒工艺,以及所带来的不同特征

Proposed translations

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如下

生产一种同时兼具现代与古典风格、朴素与细腻口感的葡萄酒;流露出为每一次收成中最上乘的葡萄精心打造的佳酿品质。

specification明显和生产或产品有关,所以vintage应指酒(或可为 佳酿),也可指酿制过程中的初级步骤。如果指酒,就有character的意思,如果是酿制过程,就应是规格的意思。

each harvest of the best fruit 是指所选用的原料是每一次收成里最好的

因为葡萄酒质量和葡萄品质密不可分,每一年的葡萄都不一样,在酿制中肯定会根据原料品质做相应调整,所以原文用了两个each,因此我选 精心打造/量身定制 来修饰 express each
Note from asker:
你好,感谢你的帮助. 我非常赞同你的翻译. 我有一个问题,"现代与古典风格"是指酒的的方面? thanks in advance
谢谢你的解释.
Peer comment(s):

agree Siwei Wang : 很棒的译文!
7 hrs
谢谢褒奖
agree Oliver Guan : 译文很流畅、通顺!
1 day 6 hrs
多谢肯定
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参考如下

produce a wine that combines modernity and classicism, elegance and finesse which reveal the specifications of each vintage that expresses each harvest of the best fruit
生产一种葡萄酒,这种葡萄酒融合了现代性与古典主义、雅致与策略,展示了代表每次极品葡萄收成的每个采摘季节的质量标准
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